I fell asleep several times on my manuscript paper this week (Disney kill me) but finally, I went after. This is the first draft. I still have the material to add to rewrite the end to incorporate the cliff hanger, but ... but ... but I think it's not too bad. A little self-satisfaction very measured not detrimental at this point. Especially as that person can not read yet, I'm quiet.
So the program: A review
- special additions + changes on paper before. A replay
- special dialogues. A replay
- special form.
I am not satisfied Baxian, still much work with him because it is a complex guy, he has a poor history gratin. Some complexities are to be settled for marjaks, and I expect a count, er, not lazy, but close.
No incipit for Siwès Chronicles. It rolls the dice, and we remain closer to the reader. Such is the rule. To see if I will win ... * Voltage *
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